★iFeel by Marissa Carmel (Vis Vires Trilogy # 1)
I won this book through a LibraryThing Members Giveaway in exchange for my honest review.
Huh?
What is this author talking about?
*deep end of the Caribbean- Defiantly the deep end, surely not the shallow end of the sea.
*Eunique grunts as he parts my hair.-If your hairstylists grunts at you, you might want to find a new one.
*Justice grunts disgusted-There's a lot of grunting going on here.
*he drifts comonlly to the front door-Really? He drifts how? Commonly
*Apostrophes everywhere they don't need to be, but never where they should be.
*I hanker for composure; barely withstanding the sensations that take to long to to settle.
*Retreiving my pointe shoes-50% wrong vs. 50% right, nice.
*You can't just put any two words together, and it be a real compound word.
I really don't know what happened here. Did I get a bad copy?
Maybe this is a horrible translation on an ESL book. The are random Spanish words, thrown sporadically throughout.
I don't know how I got through this book. Well okay, yes I do. I had to skim read most of it. I really hope this is not the version that is being sold. If it is, you might just want to save your money.
